Before You Rewrite It, Find Out Where Readers Get Lost.

A real estate document can be factually correct and still leave readers confused, uncertain, or unsure what to do next.
The Real Estate Communication Review identifies where that happens before you spend time or money rewriting the document.
Flat fee: $125
Typical delivery: Within 72 hours after the document and payment are received
Why Start With a Review?
Not every communication problem is a writing problem. Sometimes important information is missing, questions remain unanswered, or the message appears in the wrong order.
The review identifies the underlying problem before you decide what needs to be rewritten.
What the Review Examines
Your document is reviewed from the reader’s point of view to identify:
Where the message becomes difficult to follow
Important questions that remain unanswered
Information that may be missing or misplaced
Weaknesses in structure or sequence
What should be retained, clarified, moved, removed, or rewritten
This is a communication review, not general proofreading.
What You Receive
You receive a written report explaining what is working, where readers may become confused, and what practical changes should be made next.
Documents You Can Submit
Common examples include:
MLS Listing Descriptions
Agent Biographies
Brokerage Profiles
LinkedIn Profiles
Client Emails
Press Releases
Don’t see your document listed? If it is part of your real estate communication, it can usually be reviewed.
Reviewing Your LinkedIn Profile?
When the Question Is What a First-Time Reader Sees
If you want to know what your profile communicates before you explain what you intended, the Agent Profile Mirror may be the better fit.
It provides an independent first-time reading and then compares that interpretation with your intended message.
How It Works
1. Submit your request: Complete the short form below and identify the document you want reviewed.
2. Receive instructions: I will email you instructions for sending the document and paying the $125 review fee. Submitting the form does not create a payment obligation.
3. I conduct the review: Work begins after the document and payment are received.
4. Receive your report: Within 72 hours, you will receive your written Communication Review with findings and recommended next steps.
Request Your Communication Review
Complete the form below to request your $125 Real Estate Communication Review.
Submitting the form does not require payment. I will send the document-submission and payment instructions after reviewing your request.
Your Information
Submitting this form does not require payment. I will email you the document-submission and payment instructions after reviewing your request.
Typical delivery: Within 72 hours after the document and payment are received
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